Tyler Campbell
“The Lottery paragraph”
Sophomore English
24 September 2007
The short story “The Lottery” was bad because it was boring, vague, and lacked charter development. There wasn’t enough action really for the story. They mostly focused on the drawing of the lottery. It didn’t give enough clues about anything like the lottery or the culture of the village. It some what hinted at the background of the lottery but it didn’t give us any useful information about the lottery. The charters in this story are flat. They don’t give us the charters background or what they are like. That’s why the “lottery” is bad ‘cause its lame, hazy and it has no growth to the village people
1 comment:
Great job, Tyler!
You followed the paragraph formula perfectly.
Can you edit your post so that your paragraph is separate from your heading and indented five spaces, please? I am a stickler for formatting.
Please capitalize the "L" the "lottery" and add the article "The"; it also needs to be capitalized. Last sentence needs a period. Capitalize the "p" in paragraph in the heading. Character is spelled incorrectly.
Well-developed paragraph.
Will you please make a post about your thoughts on the paragraph formula.
Thanks, Tyler!
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